Good advice well done.

Oh that's another plate poem. ^_- It's cute and is indeed an inspirational little poem. :) I quite enjoyed it.

Four out of five.

Wonderful message expressed throughout this whole piece, a very touching and inspirational poem. Nice work. Keep writing, always and forever...

Thank you for the praise of my simple words

I was trying to work a bit of wodr play with "change" not changing and "remain" becoming "reclaim" and being far enough seperated to fake a rhyme scheme.(2-8-10/4-6-12). Just had the thought/story then the words seemed to flow into place.