Comments : Lost little girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Girl life is not created to be understood
    dont try to understand
    cause it will become much complicated
    dont try to understand
    because your life is going to be wasted
    dont try to understand
    becuase poor people like us not rated
    all what you can do is DONT try :(

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMizz DistructionxX

    I think everyone has had this feeling at least once in their life.
    It was very good.
    I like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I really liked the first and last stanzas, there was so much emotions pouring out. You wrote this very well, and I enjoyed each bit of it. Keep writig, always and forever...

  • 17 years ago

    by NoUr

    ..i lived like that 4 such a long time..but lately i realised that,that's life..it sucks..but u hav 2 live it anyways..so be happy as much as u can..and try to live..i loved the poem..keep writing..but wish u wont be scared nor lost in ur other poems :)