Comments : The Last Image

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem is so touchable..It was kinda short but I really enjoyed reading it:)
    Keep up the good work...

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Aww.. so sad..=( but i have been there as well.. it is simple again but it say a lot.. am here for you... I love it .Awesome job =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading this write.

    "Visions of your rushed to my head"

    your should be you.

    "The last image I saw was you
    It made me realize
    All this time I was being true
    You created my demise."

    Great ending stanza, sums it up perfectly. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 15 years ago

    by justl0veme

    I LiKeD It iT wAs GoOd...i CoUld rElAtE

  • 15 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well thats a very lovely poem and your subject choice and metaphor choice was good i thought that matbe you could have stretched the idea a bit/used it a bit more but never the less it was still well thought out and executed.Well done

    Grant