Comments : Radioactive Misery

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "The helpless are left to die,
    The dead are left to disintegrate,
    The others witness and cry,
    Knowing death will be their fate,
    The path of radioactive rays,
    Sending the world into a haze,"

    Great rhyming and throughout this write, there was so much imagery, I could see it in my mind. But this was a very thought-provoking write that kept me interested the whole way. Keep writing, always and forever...