Ouch!!
these last words were like a punch in the face
the poem ended quickly!! and sadly
i wish the end wasnt breakup :(

Good write! keep it up!

Eff him sweetheart!!! he left you? uhhh he left some beautiful poetry... hey i liked this... i like those pauses with the periods makes it cool. :)
lovely 5/5

Dammmmmmmmm poem was beutiful til
the end