Nice poem, you can totally sense and feel the emotions and sorrow in the words. Great work, keep it up.

Im sorry Murf but i think it would be better of you'll categorize it as a funny one..I think ull get more votes if you change it..Hahaha....I dint intend to laugh but i couldnt stop laughin while readin it..The picture was so clear, yep its a funny thing..hahaha esp the hair thing..Although the last stanzas mellowed a bit..Nice one Murf..xDD