This is eerie. I like how you are so descriptive but it scares me. I like this. And even if I could I wouldn't change one single thing. Amazing. =]

Lexie

Gabby, once again you knocked me off my feet, and now I'm stumbling trying to get up and get fully balanced. And, you say....you haven't been writing good poems lately? ARE YOU SERIOUS? Like really. That poem was breath TAKING! I was literally gasping for air.

1000/1000

Wow, i really liked this poem. its like your fighting the demons in your self. its an epic battle, i can take this poem and use it for so many things in my life. i really loved it, im adding it to one of my favorites.