Really well done. The only thing I could say here is to keep an eye on your actual grammar and punctuation. Capitalize where you need to, end sentences if necessary, things like that. But I'm really OCD about that too, so...

Good job!

I really liked it, you are very talented and thanxx for the comment on my "I want a man poem" lolz I'll be sure to add this to my favz.

A Really Great Poem, Keep The Good Work Up.!

5/5(: