by jasmine cherry Aug 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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I lie beneath this willow tree |
by liiz
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I like how the rhyme was continuing but then it just stop. other then that its very good. try writing more love poems yeah? 4/5 |
by Monse
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I really love this poem.. Did it happend to you?? Well all your poems are nice and they seem realistic. And mostly all of them we could relate to them.. |