Wowwwwww...This poem is totally different.
U made a great progress.I'm so impressed:)..
Good job ,keep it up..

Wowww this one blew me away. you took
me away with your dream. I really enjoy
reading this. 5/5

Great poem. i always wanted to be an angel, for me to guide all the people who are so dear in my heart and i want to fly, i want to feel the feeling of being free.

Good poem... Enjoyed it. Description is good and it flows... well! Keep writing!

Aw. This is beautiful. I think you did a wonderful job on this. I only have one.. suggestion, I guess.. you should pay closer attention to the beginning of your lines. Some of them are capitalized, and some are not. I think you should form some pattern. Other than that, it's great!

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana

Aw how cute..I love the idea so much.
love the last line the most
Idk what else to say..great write :)

keep it up
xxx

An angel :( wings :( fly:( how can i draw tears shapped word in this line ...........

A beautiful image was drawn,
In my mind by my beloved mom
"cute & adorable angelic babies,
all lived where my dream was"

^^^I love these lines Nour:)
You are still so very innocent and I admire that in a young girl. Please never change:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid