Comments : Earth (Haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I love this poem. It is senryu, isn't it?

    This poem creates a lovely image about young girl who had a shower in the...morning rain... And surely...if the observer happen to be male one... Earth must look.... very FRESH...indeed... I can imagine...I can imagine... :D

    Lovely poem you wrote.... :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful imagery... bathing in cool morning rain and dazzling in blazing sun... really the earth would look beautiful...

    well written...
    keep writing..

  • 10 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done only thing I see is word flow could have been better.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mishka

    Teehee... wow... :) lovely.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Queen

    Very refreshing One. Although it only described the daytime..I think it would have been even better if you mentioned the night as well...That was just my opinion although this piece was already done wonderfully.

    Great Job..