Nice outlines....
like the courage in this poems
in a very unique way...well anyhow
keep 'em coming up!
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Ooh deep and dark!!!
i love it!!! great job as always!!!!
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Wow man. You are such a talented writer. I really love reading your poetry! 5/5

I wonder what experience made you create this poem
its dark nice and very good

That's fantastic....

where do you get inspiration?....i hope i can make something as dark and as deep as yours..

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This was a good poem. Others may relate to this. This sounds like a guide, or actually a note. to tell a person not "to fall for the dark eyes" which is great.

I liked this poem and I'm going to be sure to check out some more of your poetry. Your really good keep it up

Made me think of my ex's eyes hmm, great poem

Idrk about this one. sounds like ur reapeating the same message like 5 times in different ways. reminds me of my dad. idk. gl with ur talentedness but dont let urself get repetitive....

Stained,
someimes, things bear need of repetition, and it adds to the deep emotions..

I like the line "Yet the soul shines brighter than the sunrise,But don't be fooled, those eyes do pulverize"

Very vivid imagery there. Good job.