"Is heaven the place we place our gods
Or are we placed what are the odds
Is wondering a habit of the mind
Can we, or do we leave habits behind"
`Great rhyme and flow and everything, but if you are asking questions, I think you should put in question marks.

"No is such a negative word
Let your mind go free as a bird"
`Oh. I loved this. So true, I thought. I agree with you completely. (:

"Open you eyes, see what you can find"
`First you should be your.

"What if the world was a spiritual habitat?
Living in peace, can you imagine that?"
`Great questions! Makes the reader wonder themselves.

"Wearing our habits like hearts on our sleeves
Learning our lessons like Adams and Eves"
`Great similes to end a piece. Amazing.

Overall, great write. Everything was fabulous. Well done. 5/5

Love it truly wonderful keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

Some scientist would reduce or expand where opposites tend to meet and merge to a speculation. One such speculation is that soul and spirit, in etymology, seems to be connected to air. Air must have been a mysterious invisible element that could be heard in the wind and felt when active. Living animals breath and dead ones do not. Air is one of the most essential primitive elements in earth fire and wind. But all are as necessary as water that falls from the sky

Spirituality is derived from the spirit. A spirit can move in passion or rest in reason

Would you help me explore the balance of the heart, soul, and mind?

Very cool poem. I enjoyed the reading it more and more as I went on. I really liked the second stanza. You picked a good choice of words there. Keep up the good work.

Um , i don't really under stand.. But I'm more of a slower person .. Anyways, i really like the flow , and the rimes are also great . 4/5

Excellent poem truly aamzing ryme, flawless in my eyes.

beautiful written, good questioning also.

keep up the good work,

5/5

Wow. I absolutely loved the third stanza. I like all of your poems, of course. This one is probably my favorite of yours, though. I loved the question you ask.

Very creative and good message... :)

Oh, WOW!! Nicely worded and written. When you have the ability to make your readers sit back and ponder on words they passively brushed off, pat yourself on the shoulder hun!! You did a great job putting this piece together! God Bless!!
*5/5*

Nicely written i love poems that make you think great job on this one