Oh goodness, I wasnt going to comment on the poetry because the style wasnt something i had preferred but as i was readin i realized i had to comment just because thats where im at..however my story aint so crystal clear.. i cant even write about it.. its that messed up.
but welldone with the emotions..
and it may be a lil cliche.. but who carES? if thats how you feel

sorry its nt entirelly constructive criutisism.kaitlyn.