Love your poem..it dosent rime that much but some poems dont need to, to be understood!great job!

Well its unbelievablee,u know what i think inside every girl there is this week spot or u can say inside every1,and i can really tell u tht u really really really well expressed it hun
keep it up
and remember am here 2 read ur poems:D:D

Another good poem, so sad but beautiful, 5/5