I liked it a lot, it's cool

An absolutely beautiful poem that has such a deep meaning. You really made me smile with this write!

"maybe a poster,
maybe a lamp,
not to impressive,
curtains up and clamped."

Simple but good rhyming here, and I could seriously see this in my mind.

"the Grey paint is gone,
incomes more light,
you did all this,
you made the world more bright."

Great ending, left me wanting more! Keep writing, always and forever....

Loved it. i hate u kyle!!! ur 2 gud> =P keep writting cuz if u dnt i will need 2 hunt u dwn!!! lolz

Oh make sure when ur writing poems ur putting the right word in like hear is suppose to be here ok i hope that didnt hurt u any just trying to help

Oh make sure when ur writing poems ur putting the right word in like hear is suppose to be here ok i hope that didnt hurt u any just trying to help