That was so sweet! I loved how sensual it was, and how you didn't have to go into the personal details of your relationship to make it romantic.

Great Write...hope you win the contest!

Thats wonderful darling..
its really very romantic & perfect
its short but every word has a meaning of books wooooooooooooow
i wish u to win the contest my sweety pie

That was very good and very romantic or lustful nice word choice to

Nice poem!!!

i can say lustful Tempo did describe the whole poem before i read it...

the nice thing i loved about your writting was the image i had when i was reading your poem!

you put your words in ways that makes the reader to keep on reading!...

keep it up!

This poem was a little hard to read because if it's structure. There weren't any rhymes, but maybe it's your style. I foud the words breaking the flow a little bit, but the expressions you used were good most of the times.

Nice job overall 4/5

Wow. Left me breathless. A perfect display for a perfect peom. No complaints here =)

Flow was perfect all the way though. The descriptions you used were equally great!

I enjoyed reading every word in this lovely poem =)

Keep writing.<3

5/5

Aw, that's sweet.

It's got it's own little sweetness to it. I liked it. It was short, yet so full of thoughts, feelings and emotions. It painted a full picture in my mind which is strange for how short the poem was. Great job!

-mo-

Umm I foung this piece hard to read, it didn't have a very distinct flow which made it hard for me to really get into your piece, although you used wonderful words, and amazing imagery... 3/5

Beautiful. :) I loved it. 5/5

Ur poem was kinda short but I think this way is much better than a detailed one...
As few words could be more expressive.
Ur choice of words was perfect and the title was interesting either..
Nice work
Keep it up:)..

WOW!!! That was steamy! Very sensual good job

I especially love the way you ended it. Well done.

The pattern form of the stanzas were very nice. and The wording was excellent. I have yet to find a single mistake within any of your pieces. I think you are an extremely great writer and I'm sure that it will take you very far... I loved every poem that I read of yours today. very nice, really.

Interesting poem. I like the words you used and all... great write.

Now this poem I really like. You wrote this for your man. Im sure he loved it.