Comments : Darkness

  • 16 years ago

    by Frederick Mayer

    This poet has seemingly mastered the ability (not even the "best" can acomplish it :) ) to allow the receiver of the poem to feel like the author is speaking to them intimately, not allowing the reader to feel like a third party/voyuer! It feels "real" and I truly enjoyed the, I what believe, is a nifty "twist"
    and from whence the point of view comes from in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Waking up to darkness
    Not sleeping anymore
    Can't find any light
    Searching for the door"

    I love this part, such captivating word choice and rhyme! This whole poem is outstanding work and really was an enjoyable read. Good job! Keep writing, always and forever....