Comments : My past and my future

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "I am running
    I donâ??t know what to do."

    Just delete that a?? thingy...

    "I am running from my past.
    I am running from my future."

    I feel like in the second line you could put another word instead of running. Maybe try "hiding" or something to that extent?

    Otherwise, this poem is really good. Very touching and heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by Magdana Gedeon

    Thank you!