"He'll hold me with power
The strength of a warrior
The gentleness
Of a father
Holding his newborn daughter"

That is, in my opinion, the greatest feeling of all. I've never had a daddy so I don't know what the gentleness is like exactly, but I can imagine it. And when I read that stanza my heart just exploded. I LOVE that feeling.

"No longer my choice
To keep him around
My need for him
Like gravity needs
The ground. "

I love that too! Needing someone seems so...childish, but yet, it really isn't a childish thing. I love the gravity statement. That is really creative. Great write! Keep it up!

-mo-

Is this one about me? :o cause if so it makes me feel really fluffy inside.

I love your new poems.

Is this one about me? :o cause if so it makes me feel really fluffy inside.

I love your new poems.

A very beautiful poem.

5/5