This is just beautiful. I can think of nothing negative to say about this piece, it's perfect as is. I adore the flow (nice rhymes) and the ambiguousness of it all, it's simply breathtaking. And now I'm a wee bit sleepy. ;o)

I like your choice of words and the way you have penned it leaves room for the reader to think about it..excellent write.

Thank you for your kind words, Melissa and Mkrish. Glad you liked my poem. My favorite time to write poetry is in the early hours of the morning, just after waking up. I find my mind is more aware of subliminal/cosmic feelings abd thoughts then.