This really id beautiful, i dont see why you dont like it. i love how you kept the aspect of perfection failing strong. it was really just...beautiful.

--TheGothicAlbino

Wow... amazing..

Oh my...this reminds me of somehow...i dont know how...but somehow I know I am beautiful even though im not really...I go through words in my ears...people pushing me out of the way and just thin i am too good...i am just hopless.

But anyways....*coughs coughs* this was amazingly written...I saw the poor girl walking with fear...I felt her heart...It was beautiful but people couldnt take how beautiful it was. Its just a wonderful written about this broken hearted girl....she is finally home...but i loved this like alot...you are just amazing of telling a story...!!!!

This story was flawless by the way just like your personality!!!!!

CourtneyxHolland

<3<3

5/5