Oh my!! That took my breath away...i am abit crying also!! You did an amazing job on this piece :D But you kno I feel like this when im out there but somehow I keep on going. But I could keep reading this piece over and over again but somehow i die in tears, lol. But i really enjoyed this. Every stanza is a chapter to a book.

Keep it up!!!!

CourtneyxHolland

5/5!!! I WISH MORE BUT YA!!!!

xx

Cool.. The title was captivating,, :]
The poem was nicely written, with some great words.. Mysterious yet beautiful..
Keep on writing.. :]
5/5

Wow this is intense and very deep. nicely written. defineitly sad and evoked many emotions, but i absoulutely loved your last stanza and how it ties back to the title. thanks for sharing :)

Ur poem touched me...It brought a tear in my eye...

Notes of despair being erased
Notes of hope being written
Listening as she waits

Ur choice of ur words is so amazing...The imagery captivates the readers...besides that the flow is good..

A blacken angel beginning her fall
Her unwanted love damped by hate
She abandoned her life

What a dark state!!....I'm so impressed...This part rocked me inside especially She abandoned her life..

Awesome job,plz keep it up...

...a tear amoung the dancers in the rain.. wow...... powerful.
sweetheart.... i hope you're ok.
i thought i would check out your work.
just... amazing stuff.
you write so welll.
keep writing...
but plz...
keep yourself healthy, too.

Love, Mishka. :) 5/5