This is a fantastic piece!

fav part: "if loving a princess like you were a job, i would never retire." << that made me smile ^_^ ssoo cute

5/5

~tia

ps--the end was really really good!

Damn good Murf...I'll vote this for a weekly contest..I think you deserve it...Since the poem is really good..Good job..

WOW!! THATZ ALL THAT IZ NEEDED TO B SAID!! I LOVE IT MURF!! THIS IZ REALLY GOOD!! I LOVE IT!!! 5/5

Wow this peace of poetry is well write beautifully I LOVE IT a lots keep up the good work

Good poem, It really makes me laugh because it's so sweet. I really like it....GP

Awww...this poem is one of the sweetest...great job 5/5