Hmm i was thought when im reading in the beginning it was bout love to someone but after i read its bout ur mom, its kinda nice and u seem u missed ur mom now and u had write all those feelings that u wish to told her. very deep emotion and i can feel that, and i really understand the message, just keep on wirting all what u feel inside, im sure it can help u to realease all the pain inside ur heart,, keep it up 5/5

A short but sweet write. I would have loved to see some more detail though. plz take no offense i did like it just making a suggestion^^.

This is a great poem its filled with so much emotion and the flow is great keep it up

I remember those days
when we laughed so hard,
with that stupid phrase
we used for the yard.

I remember the time
you put me to bed,
with that nursery rhyme
then kissed my head.

I remember that night,
the night you left.
You guys had that huge fight
and you actually left.

I still remember, I remember-
the good and the bad.
Mom, do you remember?
Remember all the fun we had.

I think this would look even better with proper punctuation marks as written above.

A very short yet straight from the heart piece. I have the same issue with my family but a little worse than that. Few words but meant a lot and meant deeper impact in one’s life. Sometimes even words are not enough to describe what you have inside. Good Job.

1. your poem is AWESOME WITHOUT CORRECTIONS!!!
2. F U to all those who think they need to go around corecting peoples poems that come straight from the heart..
3. 5/5!!!!

I've read a lot of poems, some go on for hours, line after line but rarely do i read something so full of depth. you've captured your emotions really well in this. good job, +5.

Jess

I agree with Jessica...
And Alex, a lil...