This is really sad. But good. Maybe you should try writing in paragraph form ya no? and Spell the whole words out in your poems? but apart from that it was good. good job

Such a sad poem. Very emotional. 5/5. Em x

You woulddd sooo fail english lmao. but a poem isn't built on words that are spell correctly but on what it says and how its written. lovely poem and i knw people who complain about being fat your lucky you can still gain weight lolz. but lovely poem 5/5