Very, very good. very unique. not the same what i usually write, which is good because i could find another stragety to write but other than that this poem was great! keep writing.
-Stephanie

Nice, i liked it, true story. just be sure to end the final stanza with a period rather than a comma :)

Again well done your poem was interesting and thought provoking

Grant

Alot of meaning and thoughtfulness. Its really great.

I liked how you empasized the fact "that I am not alone" it's shows the point proven.

i find it really good.

Thanks so much