Nice poem =[

she's not worth it!

but i liked how u put your feelings into words.

good job

~tia

This poem is very good i love it

I'm so sorry this had to happen to you.....
very well written tho....

Awww.... babe this is sad... i feel your pain...

This is a sad but very well-written poem!
I like it. =]

Aww this poem is so sad i know the feeling. good work.

Your poem was rather sad and you sound sort of lost , but cheer up things will only improve from there, nice poem the structure was not maintained 100% but it was still good

Grant

I love this poem. It sayin that u care alot

A sad and depressive poem indeed. Poem of strong emotion. There are few repetitive words but overall it's okay. Nice work.

Aww its a very sad write and you wrote it very well. The flow was good and your emotion was placed beautifully. Great job =]

Oh wow I'm sorry bou whoever I feel ht same bout somebody else

5/5
good work
1 of my favorites
xox

Short but I still felt something when i read it. Very sad but i give in 5/5

-Laura

I liked this alot.
You have used such great
emotions.Emotions are key to a great write
getting people to keep reading
and feel for the writer.
I loved it great job.
5/5
-Kortney

Its good... love the flow!!

I really like this one. You made me feel how you felt. good job hun

This is a great poems....

i felt like this wen my boy broke up with me... i didnt want to talk for weeks on end... soon enuf i found away around the pain, and got on with my life

but this is a freaking great poem
keep up the good work arron

I know how you feel.
Nice job coveying your emotions.

Aaron,

Omg I think this was sad and yet very much filled with the one emotion I think everyone gets stuck on. Confusion. The want to know why. This poem made me want to cry little a baby (I'm very emotional though ^o^'' )

Very Good 5/5

I haven't really been writing poems with long lines recently, so I guess I'm just not used to it right now. lol But yeah.. I can definitely feel the emotion in it.. and I know a lot of people can relate. :]