Comments : You said

  • 12 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Nice poem =[

    she's not worth it!

    but i liked how u put your feelings into words.

    good job


  • 12 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very good i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    I'm so sorry this had to happen to you.....
    very well written tho....

  • 12 years ago

    by Bec

    Awww.... babe this is sad... i feel your pain...

  • 12 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    This is a sad but very well-written poem!
    I like it. =]

  • 12 years ago

    by V3RONICA AKA lil pimp

    Aww this poem is so sad i know the feeling. good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Your poem was rather sad and you sound sort of lost , but cheer up things will only improve from there, nice poem the structure was not maintained 100% but it was still good


  • 12 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    I love this poem. It sayin that u care alot

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    A sad and depressive poem indeed. Poem of strong emotion. There are few repetitive words but overall it's okay. Nice work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Aww its a very sad write and you wrote it very well. The flow was good and your emotion was placed beautifully. Great job =]

  • 12 years ago

    by chantelle kolb

    Oh wow I'm sorry bou whoever I feel ht same bout somebody else

  • 12 years ago

    by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman

    good work
    1 of my favorites

  • 12 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Short but I still felt something when i read it. Very sad but i give in 5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this alot.
    You have used such great
    emotions.Emotions are key to a great write
    getting people to keep reading
    and feel for the writer.
    I loved it great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Its good... love the flow!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kalee

    I really like this one. You made me feel how you felt. good job hun

  • 12 years ago


    This is a great poems....

    i felt like this wen my boy broke up with me... i didnt want to talk for weeks on end... soon enuf i found away around the pain, and got on with my life

    but this is a freaking great poem
    keep up the good work arron

  • 12 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    I know how you feel.
    Nice job coveying your emotions.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Screams


    Omg I think this was sad and yet very much filled with the one emotion I think everyone gets stuck on. Confusion. The want to know why. This poem made me want to cry little a baby (I'm very emotional though ^o^'' )

    Very Good 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cayce

    I haven't really been writing poems with long lines recently, so I guess I'm just not used to it right now. lol But yeah.. I can definitely feel the emotion in it.. and I know a lot of people can relate. :]