Comments : Jealousy

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That poem was nice. The emotion in it was obviously from your heart. That makes great poems. Keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    0mg that was so beautiful! I think it would be better if you wrote it in stanzas though..cuz its more like a stroy the way you wrote it so its jus a suggestion