'oh no I'm not gonna let them bring me down
neither change that smile into a frown
guilt is possessing every inch in me
I'm dreaming of the girl I'll never be'

^^^ My fav stanza. I will say you choice of words here are interesting and well chosen. Loved the rhymes and again, flowed really well. Loved this write. I think its one of the best ive read in a while. 5/5