Bricks

by david   Sep 2, 2008


Love is like bricks,

The more the love, the more the bricks

When theres enough you build a home

You settle and feel comforted, but when love isn't there

The house begins to fall apart

Brick by brick the house is falling apart

When all is gone, it is time to move to a new home

But if theres that one brick, that brick will never fall

Because the love won't

-David Nguyen

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very beautiful. I Loved everything about this poem. The way you layed out your stanzas, the title, and how it connected with the poem, but mostly the depth of it all, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

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