Exellent write. Was thinking along the same lines myself tonight.

I know exactly wah u mean buh dont put urself down cuz u n dat guy arnt no longer 2gether
do yourself a favor and move on and try to forget the past and worry about the present....because with i had some girl like that buh later on it didnt work n i spent months missing her and not getting over her...i missed out in so many oppurtunities with other women and i regret that so im jus tryin to help you so u dnt make the same mistake i did

rlly good poem i liked it

A well written poem very descriptive of your feelings and I think it was good to add the P.S. at the end . It took the sadness away. 5/5.....Jim

What a touching write. We all miss our 'first true loves' or if he wasnt a true love, then we miss what we thought was love.
You wrote about the true sadness of missing someone and the hurt and pain really came through your words.
awesome poem.