Niceee... flows nice and shows meaning.. I liked it.. keep it up.. great work.. ^-^

~Tiffy~

I liked the fast paced flow of this poem. I was able to comprehend it fairly quickly and read thru it quite fast.
this is a great poem and i totally gave you a 5/5 on it. haha!
I actually don't have any suggestions for this poem because I liked how well written and thought out it seems.

All i wonder is how old you are to have dealt with so much pain in ur life.

hmm...

take care! awesome job

A.