This is pretty cute. It makes you feel warm and fuzzy at the end. Though I get the feeling that's not quite what you were aiming for.
It had good flow, and the language was okay.
It's so short I can't pick much room for improvment. Anyway, good job, 5/5.

jess ~

It sounds a bit rocky im sorry for saying that, but i appreciate ur poems coz i know ur effort its just my own opinion. its a bid rocky coz the words has a deep meaning but over all i didnt get the whole meaning of it, but though still good 4/7

Ii lyked it alot! (:
my favorite part was

"Your words they stay,
Let's not delay,
Keep your memory close,
But erase the days."