"cry here,
my black rose,
show me were, my world goes"

this was my favorite stanza. it paints a very detailed yet abstract picture in my mind.

So many scars
and memories

I have somany scars that I can't explain. I wish I was never that way. But I thought your poem was very good.

Beautiful analogy. Very well written poem. Great word choice 5/5 Keep up the good work

Oh.. wow. this is amazing.. it's like how feel sumtimes well usually all the time. Im dying n bleeding inside. i love it. Awesome job here! keep it up!

Take care,
Frenchy

An interesting poem because it was very different and unique. and i mean that in a really positive way. devils, angels, roses, pain, light, rain, blood, memories all in one poem. great. i liked the last stanza best.

Great poem, i loved it(:

5/5.