I thought this write was beyond creative. it was very unique. i loved the form you wrote in and how you expressed yourself. and the title of the poem is quite eye catching.

It went from apple juice, to vodka bottles,
From bruises on the knee, to people slitting their wrists,
From baby dolls, to real life pregnancies,
And from the best of friends, to worst enemies

i liked that stanza the most. it's really true. pure and heartfelt. tells what every teenager goes through. all and all i loved this piece, it was different. and different is good. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Dude this poem was really good

i like how u express urself

its very good and truthfull!!!

loved it!!! <333

Dude this poem was really good

i like how u express urself

its very good and truthfull!!!

loved it!!! <333

Dude this poem was really good

i like how u express urself

its very good and truthfull!!!

loved it!!! <333

Srry didnt mean to post it that many times!