Im lost in what it means i have a couple of ideas Your talking about a friend of yours that has done things to other people and himself? idk you should total Pm me what it means O.o Once again really good flow.

Its deep almost every word gives you a picture of the point you are tryn to get across.
i dont like to suggest things, but you should make it longer

This is so refreshing. You have quite the imagination and no one else ever writes about this kind of stuff.
amazing : )

That was certainly different. I definitely enjoyed this piece and I have to admit that whole wondering who this "stranger" was kept my attention. It flowed well together and the words mesh well.
~Faith-less

Wow u betta kick him out lol. Nice creepy poem.
-vino

With that last stanza. you didnt have to explain he was a ghost well done

=O
Oh wow. seriously, words fail me.
Its just so well written, I wanted to point out a certain paragraph for clarification or something, but i re-read it and every verse is as good as the last.
Wonderful, I must say, well done!
x

Wow i loved this. the subject is unique, not many people are encouraged to write about things like this. but you did a wonderful job at doing so. it was fantstic, i loved it all. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

So descriptive yet so mysterious....i've never read a poem quiet like this one and i must say, I LOVE IT! thank you for the lovely comment on mine. Doesn't seem like to many people like my stuff anymore. it's feels good to see someone actually reading them.
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

Good I like the way you started it off that was good and I am going to drop a line for you.......a stranger is what I met. a stranger I now fell in love with in the strangest place.........

Good I like the way you started it off that was good and I am going to drop a line for you.......a stranger is what I met. a stranger I now fell in love with in the strangest place.........