Nicely written charles almost like a fable the has some underlying truth to the story, i enjoyed it , well done

Grant

Nicely written charles almost like a fable the has some underlying truth to the story, i enjoyed it , well done

Grant

This was really good. painted a nice picture in my head and i loved the deeper meaning to it.

Great poem!

Hmmm... good and thoughtful. Something very different. It starts so well... captivating indeed!

What a lovely poem and one that gets the reader thinking.Thank you for sharing it.

Awesome poem but a little really made it complicated but keep it up okay awesome (^_^) 5/5

Wow! very powerful meaning behind this poem