Very nicely worded. Excellent. Keep on writing on this subject.

... little confused....
but it flowed well and the rhyming was on point. i could picture it as i read it.
good job!

I really liked your opening stanza. The whole poem was very well written and it flowed so well. Keep it up

I like this poem, it had a few twists. The beginning started out really strong, you stayed focused all the way through. That makes a outstanding piece of work. :) Good Job.

5/5