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Awee, thanks for the comment.
I like the poem, and the structure. Very well put, but it could use some more detail. Anyways, it was good.
Keep it up.
by Sweet lig
That was really short but so sweet, nice expressing ur feelings here, the emotions was really well express and very touching piece keep up the good work and keep on wrtitng all what u feel 5/5
Good job! i really liked it especially this stanza:
iYet you do nothing to show me
Your feelings are real.
I sit at night and cry,
Hoping you feel the way I feel.
i feel the same way sometimes :)
I know the feeling nice poems a short but sweet write. however more detail would be nice, but nice write.
by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol ;p
It waz really touchy ... deeep meanin ... keep it up ...
by Beautiful Forever
I'm amazed at how simple and effective this poem is. Your word choice was simple but it held so much emotion. I really felt this poem... 5/5
Yo dis poem was crack man!! meaning it was greatttttt! lol
Filler words such as "baby" only work in a poem if they are used with lots of sarcasm, otherwise they sound too cheesy.
The emotions in this again where there, I just think that you can bring them out a little better. I can't wait to see your writing in another year or so.