Comments : Why Am I Feeling Like This? *

  • 11 years ago

    by Fantasy

    Awee, thanks for the comment.

    I like the poem, and the structure. Very well put, but it could use some more detail. Anyways, it was good.

    Keep it up.
    Dollface.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    That was really short but so sweet, nice expressing ur feelings here, the emotions was really well express and very touching piece keep up the good work and keep on wrtitng all what u feel 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by jojo

    Good job! i really liked it especially this stanza:
    iYet you do nothing to show me
    Your feelings are real.
    I sit at night and cry,
    Hoping you feel the way I feel.
    i feel the same way sometimes :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I know the feeling nice poems a short but sweet write. however more detail would be nice, but nice write.

  • 11 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol ;p

  • 11 years ago

    by Moon

    It waz really touchy ... deeep meanin ... keep it up ...

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I'm amazed at how simple and effective this poem is. Your word choice was simple but it held so much emotion. I really felt this poem... 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Smilie

    Yo dis poem was crack man!! meaning it was greatttttt! lol

  • 11 years ago

    by ether

    Filler words such as "baby" only work in a poem if they are used with lots of sarcasm, otherwise they sound too cheesy.

    The emotions in this again where there, I just think that you can bring them out a little better. I can't wait to see your writing in another year or so.
    Good poem.

    jess ~