Beautiful! Fantastic imagery. I was just drawn into the very depths of it. It has a little creepy thing about it, but if you read it deeper, its a fantastic piece not just meant to be some strange fantasy kind of work. It's like a journey into the darker sojourns, into remorse and frustration, angst.. and towards the end it's like someone provides a hope, a whiff of fresh air amongst all that rots inside.

I think this was brilliant. The words were simple, but well. They carry great depth in them if read carefully.

Loved it.

Oooh....creepy. Its so descriptive it sends shivers down my spine. And the imagery is so vivid, its alive. The words spill off the page and paint a picture. A picture marred with ugly scenes. Either you have experienced the emotions ringing through the poem, or you are very creative. I sincerly hope the latter is the case. Nonethe less, it is a wonderfully written poem.

Hmm this is really has a long piece that was truly has a great deep emotions. i love the message its kinda perfect expressing the words. this is really fabulous work keep it up5/5

I have to agree with what's been said above me. It's very descriptive and gives me chills. It was like watching a movie the entire time. Wonderful job =) All 5's.

This was oh, so beautiful. The word choice was absolutly amazing. It was you unique and it had a huge sense of power in it. You are a very talented writer and I extremely enjoyed your poem :D