I hope you don't feel too sad :(

awesome poem, you're so talented.
<3 Em

Amazing..... a good piece that i never hesitate to give u 5/5.....

the best n sadess line to me is

(You're a sparrow in winter,
Leaving me for warmth.
I'm leaving.
Longing to be cold,
Now contently to warm.)

well..... overall i like it from the start till the end......
but pls don't tell me this is the of u writing
pls keep writing..... =)

I love it its awesome!!