What a lovely peaceful poem it seemed to have a sort of melancholy feel to it though, but a most enjoyable poem,well done

Grant

This is an awesome poem yaar, very refreshing. Beautiful view comes in mind while reading it, great selection of words for making such simple poem so powerful.
Great write dear, loved it

all the best and take care

This is an awesome poem yaar, very refreshing. Beautiful view comes in mind while reading it, great selection of words for making such simple poem so powerful.
Great write dear, loved it

all the best and take care

Cindy,
You know how much I love nature poems and this one is no different. It exudes all of the beauty of the season. I love this season and it is by far my favorite. I love how you tied in your vision of what you see from your window.

Glancing out my window
Light Autumn breezes blow
Playfully dancing through
The arms of my old tree

^^ I love how you worded the wind playing in the trees dancing. Ownership of the tree, letting someone know that this grand oak is your vision and what you see.

Summer season coming to an end
Yet a new one awaits it's birth
Soon yellow will tinge green
On leaves I've come to love

^^ Some people overlook the beauty in the simple things and the leaves you have come to love are a reminder of the beautiful things in life are sometimes right in front of us.

One stately oak tree
My vision of the outside world
Allowing me to see
Vivid colors of nature's Fall

^^ Again this is your vision and a majestic one at that. I love the description of how stately and majestic you have made the beautiful oak.

Wonderful job on a nature poem Cindy. I am so glad to see you writing outside the box so to speak. What a different level you have taken to provide the reader with a great description.

Good imagery in this free verse. Your words paint a beautiful picture. I like the reference of the Stately Oak. Nice job!

Cindy...that was truly amazing hun =]
I love the title, its so captivating..
last stanza took my breath away
absolutely wonderful sweetie
5/5

keep it up
xxx

Truly amazing, i like the imagery on this, thanks, Cindy:)

Cindy,

I see you too have an affinity for nature, specifically trees, an oak in this case.

Oak trees are to me, like old wise symbols of nature. They survey the landscape, quietly, methodically taking stock of all comings and goings. They gather this information and have over the years, hundreds of them learnt about man and his dark nature.

In this poem, you praise not only the wise oak, but also the beauty of autumn and its place in the cycle of life, yours and the oak. You describe this relationship and it is clearly respectful. The oak has arms, making it almost human, suggesting that it does in fact posess wisdom.

This is a colourful poem that has a richness of maturity that lends itself nicely to its theme. A poem complimenting mother nature on her wonders, one of them being her stately trees!

Well done

Michael

I could feel the breeze and see the leaves as they turn their majestic colors for fall. Very well written.

What a beautiful poem...Great imagery, too..
Keep writing..
5/5..^_^

Beautiful. Tribute to mother nature, which is our constant friend. 5/5