I really liked how you wrote this and it just shows that some people have the strength to carry on

WOAH.... dude thats awsome.

*claps*

5/5... keep up the great work.

xx

Very nice. a good way to display neg emotions, but with a final optimistic view. nicely done :)

Wow, very strong emotions here
i loved the FLOW
It was nice YO
my favorite stanza would have to be the last one, i loved the metaphor you used "Dust the past off my shoulders"

I can also really actually relate to this poem, I've been in that situation before, it's not a very good feeling
but anyways i liked it 5/5

Woahh thats one awesome poem!!!! I loved it! i can totally relate right now unfortunatly..but it did end with a more positive message and i really liked it alot. Keep writing! 5/5 easily