Comments : In His Eyes[Rubiyat]

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    The emotion is definitely there. I really liked the way this was written. Short, sweet, and full of emotion. That's the best way any poem can be. The flow was a little shaky but nothing major. Word choice was brilliant. And the concept was decent.

    Great write!

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    It was a sweet poem, but I've read it before, many many times before.