Very powerful poem and very well written. your words flowed perfectly with the story and the end was brilliant.

Im sorry for what happened to you but proud of you for getting back.

keep up the amazing work

5/5

Yah,,its so powerfull,,
thats the spirit!!
5/5

Wow. this is awesome.. well the poem was awesome, not the experiences your poem tells of.

the ending was pure genius. it was very well written.
5/5

xx