This was written very well and seemed as though it took some true effort to accomplish. I wish that what was on or surface's didn't matter when it came to love and attraction, but the truth is it'll always matter. We can't change what we look like, but we can change who we are. Great poem 5/5 GG23

Brilliant,
So much emotion all tied together in these few stanzas. i have had this very same situation and i dont believe it could be put in any better way, I commend you.

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This has deep emotions, and it is written very well, you have accomplished many poems, and I appreciate you for writing them. Your such a good friend!!!! 5/5