Beautiful, and very touching 5/5.

Your best work.

Yes it can hide alot well done.

A very touching poem. so true and pure. i can totally relate to it. you show true emotions in this piece, and that's a beautiful thing.

A tear holds the make-up
That I use to cover up my grief
It holds my mistakes
My scoldings
My broken dreams

i loved that stanza the most, it had alot of meaning. and i can relate to it the most of all of them. this was a great poem, and your a great write. keep up the nice work. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is the first one I have read of yours.. and my reaction is,
that I think I'm going to be reading a lot more.

I love how you have shown what a tear symbolizes.. Truly unique and emotional..

great work.
5/5

Wowww!! this is really really great! youre an amazing writer!!!