Hey Maddy you've written a very nice poem about something thats as old as time itself, and you've asked the questions well.Your poem was well written and fresh i liked it very much but if i may suggest just one thing

It seems so impossible
to be happening,
especially to someone
as unworthy
as me.

look at the last two lines i think the english is more acceptable that way but the choice is your's . Well done

Grant

Amazing.. iloveit =)

[chris&caro]

Wow.. what a great poem. You asked questions that everybody asks themselves sometime in their life, regardless of their age. How do we know that we are ever good enough? Well we dont.. we just have to go with it.

We're so different,
yet still so the same,
are you sure this
isn't just all a big game?

^^ My favourite stanza. especially the first two lines, very good.

Keep up the great work!