Wowww...this is so descriptive and heartfelt...its very powerfull and the wording is just simply amazing....nice write. keep up the great work. 5/5

Wow, what a beautiful love poem. =) i really liked this poem. it was beautifully written, i loved this verse the most:

"They walk along a path of shadows,
As the sun is shining and the sky is blue.
They think they'll be together forever,
Just like every fairy tale's suppose to"

it was really nice and loaving. great job, 5/5.

This is so sweet.. everybody dreams of this.. a fairytale love :)
i agree, the imagery was amazing.

She don't want to be in any other place.
^^
should be doesn't.

:)
other than that.. great.

Wow. reminds me of innocent Disney love. it seems so pure and right. very Romantic.

Good job ^_^

I really thought this poem was good. I liked the whole story and how you developed it. It was almost as if at the end they didn't know they were going to be together or not, but they were enjoying the time they were spending with each other. Great piece!! :)